"During the fifth grade my mother took notice of my deficient in math I end up staying up till six o' clock in the morning just to solve fraction problem yet to this day I am not quite confident with."
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You have used some wrong words, and the sentence is wordy. There are punctuation errors as well.
deficient should be deficiency
till should be until
During the fifth grade, my mother took notice of my deficiency in math. I would stay up until six o' clock in the morning solving fraction problems, yet, to this day, I am not quite confident with them.
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