restructure sentence

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What suggestions do you have in restructuring this sentence?

See example:

Assumptions are diminishing as we see more male nurses enter the profession.
asked May 22 '11 at 15:25 Linda Reynolds New member

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Assumptions of what are diminishing?

 

I believe that you can answer your own question, by just asking the sentence questions like why, what if, or from where.

 

When I edit my stuff, it really appears lame at first draft—then gets better when I begin to ask questions.
 

But of course I write stories.

link answered May 22 '11 at 19:36 Dave New member

Great suggestion! KimberlyMay 23 '11 at 11:13

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