What suggestions do you have in restructuring this sentence?
Assumptions are diminishing as we see more male nurses enter the profession.
Assumptions of what are diminishing?
I believe that you can answer your own question, by just asking the sentence questions like why, what if, or from where.
When I edit my stuff, it really appears lame at first draft—then gets better when I begin to ask questions.
But of course I write stories.
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