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It was not the only difference; even the grammar was more complicated in academic writings. So I put my writings under notification. I tried to be more sensitive about the mistakes that I made and revise my writings.

asked Dec 26 '12 at 15:14 Inge harold New member

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The word notification might not be the best word.  I understand your meaning.  You intend to convey that you would be asssiduous in your writing and examine each for mistakes.  You cannot really put writings under notification, however, beause they are not human.  You might, however, be using poetic license, and I cannot comment on that.

 

The phrase "and revise my writings" doesn;'t work.  It needs to parallel "tried to be more sensitive about ...".  The easier way is to combine the two previous sentences because they both deal with the same thing.  Then, leave the last thought as a stand alone thought.  This gives it more emphasis:

 

So, I put my writiings under notification, and I tried to be more sensitive about the mistakes that I made.  I revised my writings.

link comment answered Dec 28 '12 at 14:47 HettyKing New member

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