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This paper will focus on what the local food movement is its long history, also the role urban farming will play as a source to help recovered from these trying economical times.
asked May 20 '11 at 21:34 Kim Danzeisen New member

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This paper will focus on the local food movement's long history as well as the role urban farming will play in aiding recovery from economic recession. 

link comment answered May 25 '11 at 17:00 Kimberly Expert

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