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Having problem with modifiers "As we look forward to another church year, we encourage you to focus on prayer to build a closer relationship with God. Please help me with this sentence.

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As we look forward to another church year, we encourage you to focus on prayer to build a closer relationship with God.
asked May 17 '11 at 20:19 Ray Saenz New member

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I agree with Michael that most people aren't going to think there is anything wrong with this sentence.  My only suggestion is to change "focus on prayer to build a closer relationship with God" to:

 

" . . .focus on building a closer relationship with God through prayer."

 

link comment answered May 19 '11 at 16:44 Kimberly Expert
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Your sentence sounds perfectly fine to me. :)

link comment answered May 18 '11 at 17:25 Michael Collado Contributor
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I experienced everything for a week without my parent.I cooked, worked at home and enjoyed myself... As compared to Japan, I had experienced there for a year but there was many technologies. It helped me everything but in India, I have my own hands to work everything than the world... 

link comment answered Jun 05 '11 at 08:29 Arti Umrotkar New member

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