problem with modifiers. Please help correct this sentence.
Having problem with modifiers "As we look forward to another church year, we encourage you to focus on prayer to build a closer relationship with God. Please help me with this sentence.
See example:
As we look forward to another church year, we encourage you to focus on prayer to build a closer relationship with God.
Ray Saenz
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I agree with Michael that most people aren't going to think there is anything wrong with this sentence. My only suggestion is to change "focus on prayer to build a closer relationship with God" to:
" . . .focus on building a closer relationship with God through prayer."
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answered May 19 '11 at 16:44
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Your sentence sounds perfectly fine to me. :)
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answered May 18 '11 at 17:25
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I experienced everything for a week without my parent.I cooked, worked at home and enjoyed myself... As compared to Japan, I had experienced there for a year but there was many technologies. It helped me everything but in India, I have my own hands to work everything than the world...
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answered Jun 05 '11 at 08:29
Arti Umrotkar
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