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Please be informed that my daughter have to concentrate on her major study, which is preparing for the coming of form 4 grade, under extremely consideration, we have decided most of the extracurricular activities will be stopped accordingly, in due respect, the flute instrument class to be terminated with effective from this December 2012 onwards.
Because my daughter must concentrate on her preparation for form 4, we have decided after much reflection that she must discontinue most of her extracurricular activities. Accordingly, she will end her participation in the flute class effective December 2012.
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