how i can fix this sentence
it has a conditional mistake with the tense, but i can't see
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Malcolm X Prison Studies "Malcolm X Prison Studies" is written for any people that believe that the black women and men do not have the same right and possibility to be successful in their life and to everyone that judge before to meet a person just in Malcolm case that everyone judge him, but he change his life in prison when he became an intellectual person.
Ania
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Malcolm X Prison Studies "Malcolm X Prison Studies" is written for any people that believe that the black women and men do not have the same right and possibility to be successful in their life and to everyone that judge before to meet a person just in Malcolm case that everyone judge him, but he change his life in prison when he became an intellectual person.
Malcolm X Prison Studies "Malcome X Prison Studies" is written for any one that beleives that black men and women do not have the same rights and possibilities to be successful in their life as anyone else. It is also written for those who judge a person before they meet them just as Malcome was judged. Malcom changed his life while in prisson by improving his mind. (this last sentence still needs some work I am not sure exactly what you are trying to say.)
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edited May 17 '11 at 16:07
maggie sierras-trotts
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