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I am YYY; First I would like to express my appreciation for this opportunity to apply for Erasmus Mundus Masters Scholarship Program in ZZZ. I graduated with a B.Sc degree in Chemical Engineering in 2008 from----- University and M.Tech degree in Chemical Engineering in 2010 from ---- University. I am First Class Honours in both programs of study. With the background knowledge I have in--- Engineering, I strongly feel that a master course in Membrane Engineering will be very relevant to my practice back here in my country. During my study in Master of Technology in -- Engineering, I have taken some courses such as Membrane Science and Engineering, Design of Separation processes, and so on. From the previous study program and now from my work, I have tried to see the importance and application of membrane technology in different areas. In Europe, application of membrane technology is already advanced and developed in various areas. Therefore, study in Europe is important for me to acquire both practical and theoretical knowledge in Membrane Engineering and to do applicable research for my country. I plan to work with research based groups in Membrane Engineering sector, local universities with an aim to improve research and human resource capacity building through training. Owing to limited resources, I have not been able to proceed with further studies here in ---. I would be grateful to be provided with sponsorship to further my education and build a career and Erasmus Mundus Masters scholarship will be immensely helpful. My future potential employer especially XXX University and research organisations will be a good channel where I can transfer the knowledge gained in an optimized manner to my country, Ethiopia. In addition I will get a chance through Erasmus Mundus Masters scholarship to interact with students from diverse professional and cultural backgrounds drawn from all over the world. The exposure is important for interaction and integration of diverse ideas and perspectives pertaining to various global issues; for the world is a mosaic of different cultures and a single perspective cannot apply in all these cultures. Finally I am determined to make the most out of the scholarship benefits. I will optimize my stay at Erasmus Mundus a wealth of ideas that will apply when I return to my country and at the same time contribute to a better for Erasmus Mundus joint Universities. Once again I am grateful for considering my application and I look forward to an optimistic reply. Sincerely,
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