Is this passive voice? Should I change it to active voice?
The Chief's heart breaking, sincere words echo in the ears of the white men as they take a moment to reflect on the tragic damage to come if the purchase is made.
The only instance of the passive voice that I see here is "purchase is made" instead of "make the purchase." I don't think this is a particular problem, though it might be helpful to see the context (the rest of the paragraph before and after this sentence), in order to decide what some alternatives might be.
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