what one error in these stencen
The potatoes aren't done which I baked.
I ran into a man he was my boss twenty years ago.
My grandfather was died in the war about 10 years before i was born.
i was home alone last night.first,i was cooking dinner.then,i was washing the dishes.
The potatoes, which I baked, aren't done.
The potatoes I baked aren't done.
I baked potatoes, but they are not done.
Second sentence contains what I call a "squinting" error. Meaning that I can't be sure exactly what you mean. Which part of which caluse modifes the other clause?
I ran into a man who, twenty years earlier, had been my boss.
Twenty years ago I ran into a man. He was my boss.
Twenty years ago I ran into my boss.
He was my boss twenty years ago. I ran into him.
My grandfather died in the war ten years before I was born.
Ten years before I was born, my grandfather died in the war.
Ten years before I was born there was a war that my grandfather died in.
I was home alone last night. I cooked dinner then washed the dishes.
I cooked dinner at home last night. Then I washed the dishes, alone.
There's my two cents.
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